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FInished Chapter 21 (670 words)
Why does my journal entry disappear sometimes when I try to post it?
I can't be bothered going through the whole thing again. Anyway, the chapter is 3175 words, keeping the rhythm of 8-10 pages (at 375/page, which is what I figure by, I know there's a lot of variation but a person just has to choose), and it comprises a bus ride and a long conversation. And a divination and -- well, doctoring ritual, or maybe it's a sort-of exorcism -- which I made up of whole cloth, figuring that Citlali knows her cookies and will make stuff up too.
Araceli threatened to eclipse Candelario as a character. Citlali threatens to eclipse Araceli as a character. And Clarita, the grandneice, threatens to eclips Citlali as a character. It will take all my close attention to balance these people right.
I can't be bothered going through the whole thing again. Anyway, the chapter is 3175 words, keeping the rhythm of 8-10 pages (at 375/page, which is what I figure by, I know there's a lot of variation but a person just has to choose), and it comprises a bus ride and a long conversation. And a divination and -- well, doctoring ritual, or maybe it's a sort-of exorcism -- which I made up of whole cloth, figuring that Citlali knows her cookies and will make stuff up too.
Araceli threatened to eclipse Candelario as a character. Citlali threatens to eclipse Araceli as a character. And Clarita, the grandneice, threatens to eclips Citlali as a character. It will take all my close attention to balance these people right.