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revising is fun and easy
Well, compared to composing and drafting it is. I only added 650 or so words, but I also did a little research on Mixtec language and found out lots of fun things. Hundreds of thousands of people speak these languages. Nahuatl -- the language of the Aztecs -- has a million and a half speakers, Mixtec 400 thousand plus.
Anyway, I followed up on everything David mentioned, though I think I may leave that repetition of the word "dipshit" unless I can think of a good reason to do something different.
I'm only going to make a few more passes, I think, and then. . .
I'm going to query and I think I might know who . . .
Anyway, I followed up on everything David mentioned, though I think I may leave that repetition of the word "dipshit" unless I can think of a good reason to do something different.
I'm only going to make a few more passes, I think, and then. . .
I'm going to query and I think I might know who . . .