golden reader comments

I got back my first reader comments. I have to say this in public: David Goldfarb, you are a brilliant reader.

One of the comments I immediately knew solved several problems, and the others I knew were legit -- I did a little work and figured out how the comments fit together and what to do with the pivotal scene that all these things enmesh in.

I am stoked. I made a bunch of notes instead of writing prose today.