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1. Return to Maris -- burying Resi's ashes at the Maris Memorial Park (vignette)Pablo is 58: Resi, dead, 44; Mimi 36; Clara 21; Zahira 57; Victor 10
2. The Last Camp (long chapter)-- Pablo is 35 and works for the Combined Effort as a placement bureaucrat "repats"). The Sister: Ismail: the gangs and national groups: the gull crew and jobber: Resi -- the unidentified deep, and the mechanical locks, and bolting just as Pablo gets him a destination. Resi is 21.
3. The War is Over (vignette)-- a false hope -- accords signed, which will fall apart. Pablo is 6. Resi's mother, not identified as such, is one of several refugees featured in a "what now?" piece on tv. A celebratory dinner in That Building?
4. The Good Camp (long chapter) -- the new camp at Maris. The "good people" of Banco Bajo. Epidemic. Flood, taking in the Banco Bajo people. Resi, 23, meets Mimi, 15, and defends her. Zahira. all those events around Mimi and the birth of Clara. supplies politics. Resi is maneuvered into marrying Mimi.
5. The War is Not Over (vignette)-- Pablo is 14 and helps to raise money for the children of the camps. One of the Sisters -- headquartered in That Building -- shows him kids his age from the camps, one of whom is Resi's mother, about to give birth. Daily grind, and Pablo's vocation.
6. (long chapter) -- Pablo is at Citrus View "integrating" the repats. Political struggles. Mimi sleeps around because Resi won't touch her. Mimi pulls Clara out of school to accompany her everywhere, and Resi doesn't oppose it because he doesn't trust schools or children or anybody. Zahira gets Mimi into a school program and Clara going to school regularly. Resi joins the repats union. Pablo burns his bridges. Pablo is 45;Zahira 44; Resi 31; Clara 8; Mimi 23; Victor is about to be born.
7. Afterwar (vignette) Pablo is 20 and is interning with the Combined Effort. He ends up at old Maris and meets Resi (not identified) who is 6 alone. That Building is bombed, the first time the war comes to Citrus Heights directly. And after: the accords are signed which take.
It doesn't matter if I know the thing word for word by heart, it will change in the writing. I've streamlined the story considerably.
2. The Last Camp (long chapter)-- Pablo is 35 and works for the Combined Effort as a placement bureaucrat "repats"). The Sister: Ismail: the gangs and national groups: the gull crew and jobber: Resi -- the unidentified deep, and the mechanical locks, and bolting just as Pablo gets him a destination. Resi is 21.
3. The War is Over (vignette)-- a false hope -- accords signed, which will fall apart. Pablo is 6. Resi's mother, not identified as such, is one of several refugees featured in a "what now?" piece on tv. A celebratory dinner in That Building?
4. The Good Camp (long chapter) -- the new camp at Maris. The "good people" of Banco Bajo. Epidemic. Flood, taking in the Banco Bajo people. Resi, 23, meets Mimi, 15, and defends her. Zahira. all those events around Mimi and the birth of Clara. supplies politics. Resi is maneuvered into marrying Mimi.
5. The War is Not Over (vignette)-- Pablo is 14 and helps to raise money for the children of the camps. One of the Sisters -- headquartered in That Building -- shows him kids his age from the camps, one of whom is Resi's mother, about to give birth. Daily grind, and Pablo's vocation.
6. (long chapter) -- Pablo is at Citrus View "integrating" the repats. Political struggles. Mimi sleeps around because Resi won't touch her. Mimi pulls Clara out of school to accompany her everywhere, and Resi doesn't oppose it because he doesn't trust schools or children or anybody. Zahira gets Mimi into a school program and Clara going to school regularly. Resi joins the repats union. Pablo burns his bridges. Pablo is 45;Zahira 44; Resi 31; Clara 8; Mimi 23; Victor is about to be born.
7. Afterwar (vignette) Pablo is 20 and is interning with the Combined Effort. He ends up at old Maris and meets Resi (not identified) who is 6 alone. That Building is bombed, the first time the war comes to Citrus Heights directly. And after: the accords are signed which take.
It doesn't matter if I know the thing word for word by heart, it will change in the writing. I've streamlined the story considerably.
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2. The War is Over (vignette, about 5K) -- as #3 above
3. The Last Camp (long chapter, about 15K) -- as #2 above
4. The Children of War (vignette, about 5K)-- the Sisters: Resi's mother as a pregnant young girl, That Building
5. The Good Camp (Long chapter, about 15K) as # 4 above
6. The Tides of War (or maybe the Fog of War) (vignette, about 5K) -- the epidemic and massacre at Maris: Pablo is 18, and demonstrating for peace -- at That Building
7. After the Camps (long chapter, about 15K)-- as #6 above
8. The War is Not Over (vignette, about 3K)-- as #7 above