Beta a bitty story?

[ritaxis]

Instead of cleaning house I wrote a nearly 3.5K story this morning.  I made up some more folklore and wrote a weirdy thing.  Would any of you kind people like to look at it and tell me what it needs?

Here's the link.

You can comment there or here.

Comments

[genlisae.livejournal.com]

It is awesome the way it is. Wanting more doesn't always mean it needs more.