I'd be glad to look at your query, even though I probably won't be at all helpful.8-o (But I'll try!)
Forward motion (http://fmwriters.com/) has a board for critting queries, if you're interested. It's in/under the General Fiction board. I think you have to be signed in as a member to read or post on that particular board.
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Forward motion (http://fmwriters.com/) has a board for critting queries, if you're interested. It's in/under the General Fiction board. I think you have to be signed in as a member to read or post on that particular board.