That haiku thing

[ritaxis]

It's mayakda's fault.

http://grahame.angrygoats.net/lj-haiku/index.psp

He's asked you not to refresh "too much" but I had to refresh a whole bunch to get anything that made any sense at all.

Then I did finally get these which I like okay:


i'm getting ready
to go back and give more of
the well and truly

maybe they're not i think
i got it back on track this
vignette is words now

know what would you think
of it as necessary
or possible then

is written in a
minefield and the second
long chapter in which

it's raining on it
and it's not raining when i'm
on highway oh dog

Comments

[mayakda.livejournal.com]

That last one's very zen.

[ritaxis.livejournal.com]

I like taking them as a whole -- like that I think it does reveal something. My favorite line is "written in a minefield," which exact words never appeared in that order, I don't think.

Time to take Emma to the doctor. Again.

[jackiejj.livejournal.com]

Thank you for giving me some surprise fun.

I like this crypic one:

into shelves two of
the cardboard scouts i don't think
it's a fiery earth