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Monday, March 3rd, 2014 11:20 am
I am writing this so I will remember. I shouldn't do workshops because all the standard things that people say at workshops do not help me write better stories, they baffle me, they annoy me, and sometimes infuriate or depress me. I don't actually agree that all novels ought to have the same exact structure: nor do I believe that the reader needs to know everything the novel's going to tell them in the first ten pages. I don't believe that the first chapter ought to resolve the story's major problems or even necessarily lay out the whole problem. I don't believe that the reader necessarily has to know the whole of what the main character wants by the end of the first chapter.

And furthermore, if a person is adopting an air of authority, and projecting a wave of dislike, while using awkward set phrases to tell me to write an entirely different story from what I have in mind, I'm just not going to profit from it. The basis for the person's authority? Having attended workshops. The wave of dislike apparently deriving from not liking the subgenre in which I'm writing? Maybe?

But that's just the specifics of that workshop. I don't think I profit from any workshop anyway. I think I need to stop attending them and get feedback in other ways. It's not like it's a major activity of mine anyway. I've tended to do one every five or six years.

Yes, I do realize that my specific complaints could easily be said in those words by a person who had written a meandering, irrelevant, confusing, and unengaging first chapter, who is resistant to good advice. But whether my writing is like that or not -- and I dearly hope it is not (I'm not a reliable judge as I tend to think everything I do is crap no matter how much I also think I am on to something) -- the advice was useless. Nobody's going to improve their book by trying to jam all that in there. It would leave nothing to develop, no conflicts to resolve, no plot.

Anyway, my new writing vow: no more goddamned workshops.
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Wednesday, February 19th, 2014 09:19 pm
I have other reading to do before the weekend and I knew the day would be a wash for writing anyway because of dental work, so I finished The City and the City. I am relieved to say it's actually pretty good most of the way through despite the kneejerk women-fridging. I have a lot of thoughts about it, but one thought is that the unfortunate interview and frankly bizarre discussion questions packaged in this edition aren't doint the book any favors. I do feel sorry for Mieville, because in the interview he sounds like he knows that everything he says in this is going to come off pompous and inflated, and he wishes he could do it differently and can't figure out how. And the questions -- suffice to say if I joined a book club and somebody thought we ought to structure our discussion around those questions, I'd quit. They sound just like the very worst study questions ever foisted on K-12 students.

But the book itself. I love the premise. The protagonist's fate is the only one possible from the very beginning of the book, which is slightly disappointing, because when I realized that was going to happen early on I was fairly confident that Mieville would take another path as he did when it became obvious what was going on with the third city and that was not it. And I wasn't satisfied with the particulars of some of the politics. But I did love the richness of detail, the fine distinctions between the cities that are nested in the same geography, stuff about material culture, and so forth. I suspect the metro system in Ul Qoma is based on the one in Prague, which is pleasant for me because it's the only really foreign city I know at all and I'll talk your ear off about the amazing metro stations. And even though it's jolting and hurts the brain, the way that he has more cultural hints pointing at the Central Asian end of Europe, while at the same time giving a Baltic feel to the landscape and the architecture, is actually more satisfying, at least to me, than it would have been if it felt like he was rendering a specific real region. It felt more real to me, as if instead of being an imperfect shadow of a real thing, it was its own thing with its own gravity and solidity.

As usual when a Westerner writes in an Eastern setting, there was a hint of condescension also. It may be unavoidable.

I'm a bad audience for crime fiction. All of its conventions annoy me. It's just how it is: some people like to read high fantasy, some people like crime fiction, some people like Regency romances, and here lately I'm kind of a grumpy old lady about everything. But I've never been a good audience for crime novels, and to be fair to everyone I usually just stay away. Most of my biggest complaints about this book derive from exactly this fact. And then most of the things I like about it derive from its complicated reality and its thickly layered detail.
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Tuesday, February 18th, 2014 08:57 pm
I was a little disappointed when the Potlach book of honor turned out to be a China Mieville one. I bounced so hard off the one books of his I tried to read that I was fairly certain I didn't want to go there again. So I've been dragging my feet about getting The City and the City -- if I thought hard about it I suppose I could say I left it till late so it would be fresh in my mind -- and I just got it today. My first thought when I had it in my hand was "good, it's not as long as that other one," not so much because it's a busy week for me all told but because that meant I wouldn't have to spend too much time in a Mieville book . . .

Dear dog and all that is canine, this is a disgusting way to begin a book. And yeah, I get that it's supposed to be harsh and awful, but you know, the dead naked woman with smeared makeup and horrible wounds found under a discarded mattress in a squalid crime-ridden neighborhood?

Not edgy. Not daring. Not revelatory. It's trite and I don't like it and it disposes me ill towards what follows. I have contracted to read it and take it seriously, but I really resent it and I resent my fellow potlatchers who voted for it instead of any number of other books.
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Tuesday, December 18th, 2007 08:43 am
Are any of my Bay Area folks going to Potlatch and would like to share driving and/or a room? I might be able to afford it if so. ($119/day room, with either two large beds -- $60 each: $50 contvention fee: and whatever it costs to drive to Seatttle, split among however many drivers: that's not too bad)

I had a very good time at Potlatch the last time it was in San Francisco. I get the impression it has settled in Seattle permanently. Or maybe it's alternating between Seattle and Portland now? Anyway, it's farther away and I have a hard time allowing myself to do things like that when the nice fellow doesn't get to.

I have a little voice this morning but I'm still wobbly, possibly from not eating much for a couple days. I still don't feel like eating. Zak lent me some of his precious codeine syrup (it can be hard to get in the US, though I think my doctor would have no problem prescribing it for a cough like mine) so my ribs are getting a little rest. But I still ache when I cough. Oh, and I have now lost 43 pounds. Which puts me back on schedule, oddly.

Anyway. Potlatch, anybody?