Day seven: I've lost another pound -- maybe: it's hard to know for sure because the accuracy of my scale is probably plus or minus a pound (I can get a two-pound variation in a series of weighings at the same time).
I've gotten to page 70 or so in revision, mostly making small changes with profound impact (I think). Note to self: Parris has established a habit of making up odd sayings like "enough frustration hormones pouring off you to power a small radio station" (or was it block?). This has potential and ought to be enhanced.
Do Skip's stress migraines and Dwayne's smoked food-induced nightmares constitute a parallel? Only in Gabe/Dwayne and Marcus/Skip constitute a parallel. Hmmm.
I've gotten to page 70 or so in revision, mostly making small changes with profound impact (I think). Note to self: Parris has established a habit of making up odd sayings like "enough frustration hormones pouring off you to power a small radio station" (or was it block?). This has potential and ought to be enhanced.
Do Skip's stress migraines and Dwayne's smoked food-induced nightmares constitute a parallel? Only in Gabe/Dwayne and Marcus/Skip constitute a parallel. Hmmm.
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